Our second mini outcome was an invitation to our parents/ carers inviting them to our talent show. We received an invitation from Rotherham United asking us if we would like to come and learn about what they do and we got one from Y5 inviting us to read with them. After this we wrote the cold draft of our invitations and critiqued them in small groups. We learnt all about the features of an invitation and what we needed to include before we wrote our second draft. Our classmates then read our invitations one more time to tell us how we could make them even better before we wrote our final drafts for parents/ carers. We were very pleased with the final outcome.